I feel like I've made some pretty good progress with my essay so far. I've gone from a pretty small list, to about a page. I'm glad I picked music over photography because it has had more an influence on my life than photography. It's a really easy thing to write about for me. The fact that I based my post about senses off of music has helped a lot. It
I haven't had too many struggles yet. I think talking about it in class a little more would be beneficial. I'm also not really sure if I'm making it too personal, or if I need to make it even more personal. It's tricky because I am so used to not even being able to use the word "I" in a paper.
After some input, I feel like I'll be off to a pretty good essay!
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